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hehehe... this video really made me laugh! I think that this is your best movie ever mad HeinousDude... I mean, LipsOfLaura ;)
- Try to work in the eyes of your characters. Sometimes you make the "equal". Just keep in mind that every part of the body needs to be different, because you are looking at them in different ways.
- Work with the lips. You'll need to keep working with the draws of the lips, although they need to be sync with the music too.
- Next time use better backgrounds. Try to use the "mix colours" inside of the Macromedia Flash Mx. It's better than Plain colors.
Good luck, and keep making good movies.
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No estuvo nada mal para una animación con sticks. Trata de mejorar un poco en la calidad de los backgrounds y seguro tu puntuación subira mas :)
Ademas, deja una parte al final sin musica, ya que al volver a repetirla, se escucha la musica encimada. Sigue adelante.
PS: Try to learn some english too :) That may be handy ;)
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Good job Jack! This movie was better than I expected. Now we'll be waiting for the next episode of WTH Men 7.
First I want to tell you some things that maybe can make better your animations:
1.- Try to make a new body to Dr. Punkid, in some parts of the movie he was a little "fat". All that I can ask you is to make him a more thing. But that's just my opinion.
2.- Make in the next movie something with the girl, maybe that can give you some extra points :)
3.- Use different colours at the backgrounds, sometimes they doesn't match.
4.- Keep doing that good job.
Thanks for add Latingrounds and me at the credits :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, but don't wait standing...episode 7 will not be before march (that's the quality I'm trying to give it)
now, let's get to your suggestions
1.-I was thinking of re-drawing some of the characters, maybe make them more "accurate" when they turn around
2.-Metaliza (the girl) will have a big part on the next episode
3.-I'm lousy drawing backgrounds...I really am (and I studied architecture) that's why Efrenlingo helped me out with some of 'em)
4.-I will, I'm planning yet another video and more Wth men episodes! and after all you've done for me, you really think I would cut you out off the credits? no man, the LG link is going steady in all of my movies.
thanks for your review :)
-J
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I have a very deep sense of humor, but tonight you guys made me laugh :)
Thanks ;)
Next time, try to find a better Microphone, or a software to take out the noise (also, try recording in a place with more silence)
The animation was good, the draws were funny, the voices needs a little more of work, but you guys are in a good way :)
Congrats to both, and keep working together.
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Buen trabajo Daniela peregrina :) Me gusto mucho tu animacion, el concepto que le diste fue muy bueno. Se que te has basado en personajes de Samuray X (Rurouni Kenshin) pero por demas queda decir que te quedo muy bien el estilo propio que le diste.
No se de donde sacaste los dialogos en Japonees (Si quieres, la proxima vez te ayudo por que se japones)
Si deseas compartir con gente que habla el español en Newgrounds, puedes ir a nuestra pagina principal: http://www.latingrounds.net
Nuevamente, felicidades por el trabajo y sigue asi :)
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The Bard's song was one of my favorite movies, actually was the first movie that I liked in Newgrounds.
But, this time, the version that you guys made, made me cry... Yes I cried... it took memories from a girl that I realy loved...
Congratulations to both...
Advice: The only thing that I don't liked of the movie was that in the Original one (By Charlie) the guy doesn't move the fingers when is plating the guitar. Here happens the same thing.
I <3 you Magna, happy Birthday (Again)
I <3 you Poxpower, you are my hero. :)
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I liked it :)
Was a good choice for the audio. The animation was short, well made, and with talent.
Congratulations, keep doing a good job.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, appreciate the comments.
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Well, they are some things that can make better the movie:
First, when the guy is talking by cell phone, the fingers in the phone looks "twisted" like if this guy was born "deforme"... looks very weird...
Second: You can't kill a person with a knife trowed in the crane... You'll need to be very strong and able to trow a knife at 125 km/h and could be better if the knife hits one of the eyes... there would be easier to enter...
Keep them coming... I liked this one....
Author's Response:
whoa.. sure i'll keep em coming... gracias lol
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Me da gusto ver que poco a poco vas mejorando en tus animaciones... estoy esperando mucho de ti en el futuro como animador.
Asi que ¡Sigue adelante!
Author's Response:
Gracias,la animación la empecé y terminé elmismo día que la puse :D
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Fue interesante, me gusta el concepto de interactividad que le agregaste al clasico Tetris.
Sigue trabajando asi y que no te importe el limite del lenguage, aqui hay mucha gente de habla hispana que te apoyara siempre.
Saludos desde latingrounds.net!
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